Hikari Revised

i actually had to draw her a second time cuz the first one was POOP.
on her head and shoulders is not a gem, but simply a part of her body that... glows. like a firefly same with her entire stomach, i just forgot that when i was coloring xD;

from this [link] to this [link] to now. lets just say i really just couldnt draw in the past

anyone wanna critique?