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Originally this team was a collab with me and Kari-chan622, but because of her life taking over for a while she gave Eleos to me. I know she's starting up again, but idk if she'll come back to do the collab (she's open to it though, so who knows)
Alright copy pasta notes
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Small edit: Changed Aether's histories, and fixed her ability
EDIT: updated aethers app art!
Originally this team was a collab with me and Kari-chan622, but because of her life taking over for a while she gave Eleos to me. I know she's starting up again, but idk if she'll come back to do the collab (she's open to it though, so who knows)
Alright copy pasta notes
ELEOS
Species: Goomy
Height: 1' 00"
Weight: 6 lbs
Eye Color: Black
Ability: Gooey (If hit directly, he expels goo from his body that slows down his attacker)
Age: Young Adult
Weight: 6 lbs
Eye Color: Black
Ability: Gooey (If hit directly, he expels goo from his body that slows down his attacker)
Age: Young Adult
Notes: His body is on a more bluer spectrum rather than violet.
>Pretty cheery guy, often looks on the brighter sides of things. Eleos puts others needs before his own as his way of trying to make friends.
>Although he seems peaceful, he has no problem stepping up to the plate to support what he thinks is right.
>Has a terrible attachment issues, so any attention someone gives him, he often mistakes that for friendship and follows them around everywhere.
>He found Aether passed out on a hill near to Andalusst, and feels obligated to take care of her. He acts as her big brother or guardian
>He's often made fun of by others, because he's a bit slimier than your typical Goomy
>He loves the rain, and usually feels much more comfortable in it, so he often uses Rain Dance in stressful situations to calm himself down
>He's actually quite strong physically, but doubts himself a lot so he doesn't like to show it
>He was raised protectively by his mom, and misses her often
Moveset Reference:
Thunderbolt: He can only use this attack if it's already raining. He's able to summon Thunderbolts from the sky, although not as powerful as a similar move Thunder.
Dragon Pulse: He's able to breath a powerful, bluish white misty fire from his mouth if he concentrates hard enough.
Rain Dance: By spinning around a few times and humming to himself, he's able to summon a heavy rainstorm. He usually does this to keep his own and Aether's bodies moist, but often uses it for battle strategies too.
Protect: By concentrating, he's able to make a bubble shield of azure, hexagonal scales, but they burst into thin glitters of light if used for too long. When deactivating, he's also able to blow back objects or attacks as the scales burst outward.
Aether
Species: Skrelp
Height: 2' 00"
Weight: 17 lbs
Eye Color: Cerulean
Ability: Poison Touch (Occasionally, when making contact with others, she might accidentally Poison them)
Age: Young Adult (but appears to be an adolescent)
Notes: Her body is lankier than most, and the bobber on her head acts as a flag for her emotions.
>She can stand on the three flags of her tail like a tripod, but is very wobbly in this position and immobile. She can cling to walls and trees this way, however.
>She's super shy and clumsy and stresses out easily and doesn't want anyone to think she's a bad person. She'll apologize over and over if she thinks she's done something wrong.
>She doesn't like hurting other people, and she doesn't like it when other people hurt other people.
>If someone teases her, even jokingly, she takes it seriously and gets all upset thinking that they don't like her.
>She tries her best to be liked by everybody.
>She can slither like a snake, at a pace similar to a Ball Python. She can move faster in the rain.
>When she swims, she wades back and forth, similar to a fish. When she wants to float to the surface, she flaps her little ventral fins in a motion that looks like bouncing.
>She likes to hang out in the streams and blow Bubbles.
>When she sighs or exhales, typically Bubbles come out too.
>She only feels safe when she's around Eleos
>She grew up in the water her whole life and didn't even know about the world on land. She calls these respective worlds the "Wet World" and the "Dry World." She refers to the sky as the "World Beyond," and is still awestruck of the beauty of rain.
>She's able to breath on land due to a little fishy organ called the Labyrinth Organ, which renders her able to take in atmospheric air.
Moveset Reference
Camouflage: She already looks like rotting kelp underwater, but she can also concentrate and morph her colors similar to that of trees, though not for long. Depending on the terrain, she can also change her typing temporarily.
Bubble: She likes to blow Bubbles a lot. They're not very powerful in battle, but when she does use them as an attack, she sprays a stream of suds at the enemy. This could cause them to slow down. It attacks a wide range of enemies at once.
Poison Tail: She's able to secrete a poisonous sap from her tail, which usually dissolves in water, contaminating the whole area. She doesn't like to use this attack, but when desperate, she'll swat her tail at an enemy, potentially poisoning them. If she hits the right spot, she can manage a Critical Hit.
Hidden Power (Flying): She's not even aware that she knows this move, and it only activates as a Last Resort. If she's in a pinch and is very stressed out, her body will glow a bright mauve, and large, azure feathered wings will appear behind her, before concentrating into orbs and homing in on the enemy. She never remembers using this attack afterwards.
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Stories and Missions
Aaaaaand done! I'll add more to this as I go on, but for now..! Pretty solid I hope
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Small edit: Changed Aether's histories, and fixed her ability
EDIT: updated aethers app art!
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactTime for the positive stuff:
As usual the art style is nice with very dynamic shading and a very chalk look. Personally another tidbit I liked was the contrast between the two characters portraits, the first one having a dark, dim and depressing look to it while the bottom is a bright sunny say and the sky is blue and all is right with the world!... That was until I inched my eye to the right and saw immediate flashes of trauma and red. Speaking of the backstory I like how it was presented. The sort of blurred images and the word "NO" implies something terrible happened but while it is vague what it is it provides enough to try and come up with ones own theory of what happened, and can be left open for interpretation for those who don't have any context until they read that one chapter that explains everything. For instance you could assume that the Goomy in question saw his mother doing something very naughty, watched his mother get killed, was kicked out of the house by his mother or maybe confused Aether for his mother, or maybe Aether is his mother *Plot twist*. And for Aether you can assume its either a Archeops swooping in for the kill, a waxed mustache kecleon doing a bad pole dance with a tree (It does actually look like that), or something else entirely that I don't feel like mentioning because it was actually a good idea and I would like to keep it o myself.
The things that I think are icky and should be changed under the threat of snails eating your flesh:
If you have a phobia of snails disregard the previous statement because flesh eating slugs only exist in harry potter, but that is irrelevant. In terms of originality this piece loses once again, for three reasons. The first one being its a application for a group which implies that the app was made by someone else and had someone else's hard work put into it so one could photoshop all over it. The second reason is because of the fact that the characters are creatures not designed 100% by the author of this piece. The third is the backstory, If I had a penny for every backstory that was to come off as traumatic and depressing and involved a parental figured I'd be-... no, I won't say I'd be rich because that would imply I would get something positive out of it... I'd have a bunch of useless metal that I couldn't carry around because the sheer weight would pin me to the ground and that I could use to buy anything because the cashier would give me a look of extreme annoyance and granted I could use one of those "Turn Pocket Change Into Dollars" machines at the super market but those have a tax on them and in the end I would only get around five dollars if I did. Point is its far from original. The other thing that bugs me is Eleos's expression. It is mentioned that Eleos is brave and likes to crack jokes, which implies a optimistic go getter sort of personality. Which makes me wonder why he looks like he just walked out of a Justin Bieber concert that his girlfriend dragged him to and then dumped him promptly after, and then getting a call from his boss saying he's fired. Point is his facial expression doesn't stick with his personality in my opinion.
Other than that I liked it.